Nowadays in many countries women have full time job. Therefore, it is logical to share household tasks evenly between men and women. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Now, in several

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women

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have

full time

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full-time

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job

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.

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,

between

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men

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and

women

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have

same

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responsibility to undertake

households

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tasks

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. Personally, I couldn't agree more and will discuss it in

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essay.

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with,

women

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can be a mother and

worker

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at the same time.

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, sometimes they will feel overwhelmed if all household

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given to them only. At

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point, the husbands have important roles

to help

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their wives.

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the

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apply

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tasks

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like mopping and sweeping can

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by the

women

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and

the

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other

tasks

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like cleaning the bathroom or mowing

is

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the husband's part.

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that, the

women

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and

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will get a stronger relationship. What I mean by

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is they will have a sense of

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, appreciate and respect each other, and gender equality will increase. I think the

most

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easiest

ways

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to pursue gender equality in

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the work's

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work's

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world is by having a supportive husband who wants to share

same

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burden.

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the

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women

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can have good performances at work because they do not have to

feel

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worry about household

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.

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, I think there are no disadvantages

of

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this

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.

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,

this

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will have better impacts for

women

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and

men

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to collaborate.

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,

this

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way can be one of

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the solution

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solution

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to solve

problem

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problems

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like patriarchy for

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in their jobs.

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, the

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will not get

harrashment

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harassment

anymore just because they are working

while

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as a mom and wife.

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,

women

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who have

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a full

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full time

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full-time

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job

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jobs

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can

balancing

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balance

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their

life's

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at

office

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and

home

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at home

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. As long as

,

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apply

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there is a task division both for

women

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and

men

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.