The diagrams below show changes that have taken place in the Sawry District neighborhood since 1920. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagrams below show changes that have taken place in the Sawry District neighborhood since 1920.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The present maps compare information about the change that
happens
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happened
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in the Sawry district in 2 different years( 1920 and 2020).
Overall
, the number of both inhabitants and shops was increasing
instead
of the vegetation area.
In addition
, the industry zone has been absent.
According to
the diagram in 1920, houses and shopping
centers
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centres
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were near Oak Avenue;
thereafter
,
this
area had a large green zone but had a Tulebug Bores, Cannery.
Also
, we can see a small school.
Nevertheless
, in 2020,
this
region altered a lot;
moreover
, the figure of the citizens was climbing
due to
the fact not only the figure of apartments but
also
the size of schools was rising;
furthermore
, the place that was for schools became Petrol station, and institute move to the south which was the forests of the picture near markets. The factory was destroyed and they built the Young office complex. the road that was used going to the north residential place was
following
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followed
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, and they built a bridge under Elmwood River for access to other sides of
this
river.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.

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