Task 1 : The pie charts below describe the electric energy production a major source of energy in the US. Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information in the charts

Task 1 : The pie charts below describe the electric energy production a major source of energy in the US. Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information in the charts
The graphs illustrate
distribution
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the distribution
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of
main
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the main
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sources of
power
to produce electricity in the United States in 1980 and 1990.
Overall
, it can be seen that the consumption of oil and natural gas decreased,
while
nuclear
power
and coal increased their popularity over time. In 1980, oil was the most favoured source of energy
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making up 42% of total depletion and did not lose its position even after 10 years.
This
trend was followed by coal, which outnumbered crude oil as the second most used source of
power
and accounted for more than
one quarter
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of
whole
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. Natural gas saw a slight
fell
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in popularity and made up 25% in 1990. Regarding other types of fuels, the hydroelectric method of collecting
power
made
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up
the
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same percentage of 5 for
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two years.
On the other hand
, the amount of energy produced by nuclear
power
witnessed an increase of 50%.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words power with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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