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Maps below show the changes In the Spanish city Castellion in recent times. Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Maps below show the changes In the Spanish city Castellion in recent times. Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate the improvements in the Spanish
city
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 of
Castellion
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 over 24 years, from 2000 to the present day. Remarkable changes have transformed the suburban town into a well-constructed
city
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Castellion
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 is a port
city
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, there were no entertainment facilities for locals and visitors in 2000. The
city
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 consisted of an educational establishment with thick vegetation, a train station, and an old open market. The only motorway separated downtown from the beach. Today,
Castellion
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 has become a densely populated cosmopolitan
city
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 with all the necessary amenities for convenient living and working. The old market and train depot have been replaced by a new shop and police station, respectively. The single highway has been substituted by a pedestrian road, providing comfortable access to the cinema and pubs on the seaside. The
city
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center
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 has become a bike rental area, and a new tramline has been designed to link with the existing university. Unfortunately, trees have been cut down to build a new shopping mall. Multistory residential apartments have been placed near the educational institute to accommodate the growing population of
Castellion
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. The contemporary expanded train depot is situated between the institution and the
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center
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Additionally
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, a new airport is being constructed to improve transportation for the people.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, castellion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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