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The graph below shows the wheat exports in three countries during the year 1985-1990 in millions of tonnes. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the wheat exports in three countries during the year 1985-1990 in millions of tonnes. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided line gives information about exported
wheat
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 and three particular regions namely Australia, Canada and the European community, from 1985 to 1990. Units were measured by tones.
Overall
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, it can be seen that there was a fluctuation in
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 exports in all countries. Australia witnessed the lowest amount of sales of
wheat
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 throughout the years.
To begin
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 with, sending
wheat
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 from Canada began at around 19
million
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tonnes
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 in 1985,
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 it had a drop in 1986 to about 17
million
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tonnes
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. In 1988 it took a peek at 25
million
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tonnes
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. The
wheat
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 Fluctuated and reached almost 19,000,000
tonnes
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 in 1990. European Community became nearly 17,
million
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tonnes
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 in 1985. The number of
wheat
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 remained stable from 1987 to 1988. The number increased gradually in 1990 to nearly 21
million
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tonnes
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. Other hand Australia was the least common country to sell
wheat
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 overseas. the number began at 15
million
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 tones in 1985
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 it had a dramatic decline throughout the years and reached approximately 11
million
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tonnes
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 in 1990
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Vocabulary: Replace the words wheat, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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