Large companies use sports events to promote their products. Some people think this has a negative impact on sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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extent do you agree or disagree? These days, the best way that massive

companies

can sell their manufcturations is advertising, and factories use

sport

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events.

However

, some people believe

this

way has the opposite effect in

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sports. I differ from

this

idea because these

companies

helps

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to have more events, and they improve their devices and local firms can show their

things

. On the one hand, when different

companies

want to introduce themselves to

spectator

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they must do some works that help to upgrade

competions

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competition

.

Firstly

, they have to pay money to

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the Federation

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for

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to

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have

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a commercial

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commercial

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commercials

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;

then

organization

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the organization

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can play events with high quality.

Secondly

,

sport

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sports

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industries provide

athlete

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athletes

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tools

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with tools

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like shows, clothes, and other

things

. Later teams

whose having

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play do not have to

payed

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a lot of money for

things

that need.

On the other hand

, when the player

used

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these kind

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of

manufacturers

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manufacturing

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tools

they can get feedback

to

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from

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factories for

somethings

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some things

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such

as

closes

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qualities,

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weights, and other

tools

working;

therefore

, these firms can alter their

good

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to the best

things

which have more clients.

For instance

, when I play badminton with

heavy

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a heavy

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racket I cannot have

a

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apply

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good efficiency;

as a result

, I change my

tools

,

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and

sent

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send

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this

rocket to

it

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companies

.

Also

, the new

companies

that do not have

a

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bazar

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bazaar

sections can show their

things

;

thereafter

, players can introduce

companies

good to fans.

To conclude

, these commercials have benefits for both

player

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players

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and

companies

due to

the fact not only the number of

event

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events

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but

also

companies

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companies'

company's

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profits are climbing.