The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
The given illustrations
shows
the Change the verb form
show
process
of how Use synonyms
plastic
Use synonyms
bottles
Use synonyms
is
recycled depicted as as a cycle.
Change the verb form
are
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that the Linking Words
process
Use synonyms
of
how Change preposition
apply
it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
begin
Change the verb form
begins
from
collecting Change preposition
with
raws material
and Fix the agreement mistake
raw materials
ending
with the Wrong verb form
ends
producing
the end products which will Replace the word
production of
be use
later and Change the verb form
be used
continue
its recycling Correct subject-verb agreement
continues
process
.
To start with, the Use synonyms
bottles
were trashed in a recycled bin which will be collected later via a truck. Use synonyms
Then
the Linking Words
bottles
were collected and transported to the recycling Use synonyms
center
, Change the spelling
centre
it
underwent a sorting Correct pronoun usage
which
process
manually by staff Use synonyms
for selecting
the appropriate types of Change preposition
to select
plastic
Use synonyms
bottle
that Fix the agreement mistake
bottles
can
be recycled. Wrong verb form
could
Next,
these sorted Linking Words
bottles
were compressed into blocks and crushed through the two metal gears turning these Use synonyms
plastics cube
into small Fix the agreement mistake
plastic cubes
pieces
. These small Use synonyms
plastic
grains Use synonyms
dropped
into a large well for Add a missing verb
are dropped
cleansing
Wrong verb form
cleanse
dirts
and impurities that Change the wording
dirt
specks of dirt
attached
to it. After being washed, the crushed Add a missing verb
are attached
plastic
Use synonyms
pieces
Use synonyms
converting
into Wrong verb form
convert
a
smaller Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
pieces
known as pallets through a machine.
In regards Use synonyms
with
, the transformation Change preposition
to
Use synonyms
pieces
of Change preposition
of pieces
plastic
into Use synonyms
a products
Correct the article-noun agreement
products
a product
begin
with heating the pallets to form a raw material. The raw material is Correct subject-verb agreement
begins
essential
base for the production of Add an article
the essential
an essential
a
Correct the article-noun agreement
plastic-related goods
a plastic-related good
plastic
-related goods Use synonyms
such
as Linking Words
bottles
, Use synonyms
container
, Fix the agreement mistake
containers
stationary
, clothes and bags. The productions will be used and discarded, Correct your spelling
stationery
as a consequence
, the Linking Words
recycle
Change the verb form
recycling
process
will Use synonyms
continued
as a Change the verb form
continue
be continued
continuos
loop.Correct your spelling
continuous
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