The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
The given illustrations
shows
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the
process
of how
plastic
bottles
is
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recycled depicted as as a cycle.
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that the
process
of
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how
it
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begin
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from
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collecting
raws material
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and
ending
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with the
producing
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the end products which will
be use
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later and
continue
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its recycling
process
. To start with, the
bottles
were trashed in a recycled bin which will be collected later via a truck.
Then
the
bottles
were collected and transported to the recycling
center
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,
it
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which
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underwent a sorting
process
manually by staff
for selecting
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to select
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the appropriate types of
plastic
bottle
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bottles
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that
can
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could
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be recycled.
Next,
these sorted
bottles
were compressed into blocks and crushed through the two metal gears turning these
plastics cube
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plastic cubes
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into small
pieces
. These small
plastic
grains
dropped
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are dropped
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into a large well for
cleansing
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cleanse
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dirts
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dirt
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and impurities that
attached
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to it. After being washed, the crushed
plastic
pieces
converting
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into
a
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smaller
pieces
known as pallets through a machine. In regards
with
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, the transformation
pieces
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of pieces
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of
plastic
into
a products
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products
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begin
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with heating the pallets to form a raw material. The raw material is
essential
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the essential
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base for the production of
a
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plastic-related goods
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plastic
-related goods
such
as
bottles
,
container
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containers
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,
stationary
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stationery
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, clothes and bags. The productions will be used and discarded,
as a consequence
, the
recycle
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recycling
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process
will
continued
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continue
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as a
continuos
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continuous
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loop.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process, plastic, bottles, pieces with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling
  • mitigate
  • environmental impact
  • landfills
  • conservation
  • sorted
  • residual waste
  • adhesives
  • shredded
  • pellets
  • manufacturing
  • ecological
  • economical
  • sustainable
  • automation
  • raw material
  • life cycle
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