The diagram below shows how the australian bureau of meterology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Write a report for a University lecturer describing information shown below.
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The diagram explains
about
the process of collecting Change preposition
apply
information
of
the Australia Bureau of Meteorology to produce reliable weather forecasts.
Change preposition
from
Overall
, There are four steps in the diagram Correct pronoun usage
that started
started
with collecting Wrong verb form
start
information
, analyzing data, preparing information
and publishing the result of weather forecasts by three media.
At
the first and second Change preposition
In
stage
, there are three ways of collecting data and three ways of analyzing it. Fix the agreement mistake
stages
Firstly
, incoming information
from satellites can be directly presented for analysis as a satellite photo or, through passing the collected data to radar
stations, as a radar
screen or synoptic chart. Secondly
, the same information
may immediately be collected by radar
stations and presented to be analyzed on radar
screen or synoptic chart. Correct article usage
a radar
Lastly
, a drifting buoy can only provide information
in the form of synoptic charts.
At the next stage of the process, all of the analyzed and forecasted weather information
is prepared on a digital computer. Finally
, it is published on TV (presented by forecasters), on the radio, or as a recorded telephone announcement.Submitted by k a l l a on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words information, radar with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "presented" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 7 times.
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