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life-standard
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the standard
decide
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growth leads to volume of traffic increases in both public and private Correct your spelling
pollution
transports
. That causes the rise in Fix the agreement mistake
transport
the
carbon dioxide emissions, Correct article usage
apply
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breathes
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breaths
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results
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for
in
rush hours. Change preposition
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in
increase
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an increase
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costs
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the services for basic needs Change preposition
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such
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where
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which
gathers
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has
large
population, the cost of electricity is double Correct article usage
a large
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the countrysides
countrysides
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countryside
this
problem leads to the situation that people have to earn higher Linking Words
income
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incomes
thoses
roars dramatically
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those
on the other hand
, to prevent all the negative matters mentioned above, I am going to give some useful ways. Linking Words
first,
the government should introduce Linking Words
the
policies to promote and support the movement of factories, universities and hospitals to rural areas. Not only that they Correct article usage
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also
need to construct and develop important infrastructures, Linking Words
for instance
, improve electricity lines and update roads so that citizens are more willing to leave cities to start their new life in other spacious places and bring the hope that they would have a better life. Linking Words
second,
promoting the use of electric means of transport could decrease the toxic exhausts from vehicles powered by fossil fuels. by encouraging in Linking Words
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friendly
electric resources as solar power and wind power, the atmosphere becomes fresher Change preposition
of friendly
that
enhances our health and Correct pronoun usage
apply
lessen
diseases
In conclusion, the growth of Change the verb form
lessens
population
causes a lot of detrimental problems in both physical and mental health and costs Correct article usage
the population
much
money. Correct quantifier usage
a lot of
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why the government have to give policies like Linking Words
remove
important buildings Change the verb form
removing
to
rural areas and Change preposition
in
heighten
facilities in wide open spaces.Wrong verb form
heightening
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