You stayed at your friend’s house when you attended a conference in Australia. Unfortunately, you left a large envelope with some important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter: thank your friend for the stay describe where you left the envelope ask him/her to return it to you by post Begin your letter as follows: Dear _________

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Dear Marry, I hope you are doing well! Thank you for letting me stay at your place when I attended a conference in Australia

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week. And

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, thank you for showing me around in Perth. It was

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a beautiful city I have ever seen. It was a wonderful time to catch up with you, get to know your family and meet your newborn baby. I hope we can meet up someday again. Anyway, I need a favour from you. A sealed brown envelope with some important documents was left in the room where I stayed at yours. It should be placed in the first drawer from the top of the desk. There was a red wording of confidential on the envelope. I would be grateful if you could find it and post it to me by registered DHL air mail. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Thank you very much for your help! Best regards, Jane Hunter

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task achievement

The letter is well-organized and addresses all aspects of the task. However, adding more detail about the contents or importance of the documents might make the urgency clearer.

coherence cohesion

Your paragraphs are logically structured, but you can enhance coherence by using more linking words or phrases to smoothly transition between thanking, describing the location, and asking for the favor.

task achievement

You have effectively thanked your friend and acknowledged their hospitality.

coherence cohesion

The layout of the letter, including greetings and signing off, is appropriate and well-structured.

coherence cohesion

Each paragraph addresses a distinct idea, which aids readability and understanding.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

161 words

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gratitude
hospitality
envelope
important documents
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conference
enjoyable
sightseeing
specific aspects
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