The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line chart illustrates how the ratio of the
population
over 65 changed from 1940 to 2040 in Japan, Sweden
and the USA
respectively.
During the period, Japan will be expected to arrive at 27% population
aged 65 in 2040, higher than Sweden
and USA
, which will Correct article usage
the USA
stands
at 25% and 24% respectively. Though Japan Change the verb form
stand
was
the lowest proportion of Verb problem
had
population
over 65 between 1940 and 2005 less than 5%, it increased steadily Add an article
the population
at
10% in 2030 and rose significantly and higher than Change preposition
to
Sweden
and USA
Correct article usage
the USA
stands
at 25% in 2035.
The proportion of Wrong verb form
standing
population
aged 65 in Add an article
the population
Sweden
and USA
started at 7% and 9% in 1940. Both increased steadily and the Correct article usage
the USA
USA
was always higher than Sweden
. Until
1995, Change preposition
In
Sweden
overtook the USA
and arrived at 14%. After 1995, the USA
remained at around 14% until 2018 reincreased
, reaching 24% in 2040, Verb problem
increased
whereas
Sweden
increased
fluctuated and arrived at 25% Verb problem
apply
finally
in 2040. Overall
, the ratio of population
aged 65 in three different countries is similarly
in 2040.Change the word
similar
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, sweden, usa with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stands" was used 2 times.
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