The bar chart below shows the international student enrolments at three universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.
The bar chart depicts
number
of international students of three Change the article
a number
the number
University
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Universities
categorise
by Wrong verb form
categorised
country
.
Overall
, the ranking of country
inAdd an article
the country
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a
the
number
of enrolmental
students Correct your spelling
enrolment
enrolments
remain
the same for all these three Correct subject-verb agreement
remains
university
and Change to a plural noun
universities
University
of Correct article usage
the University
riverview
always Change the capitalization
Riverview
have
the highest Correct subject-verb agreement
has
number
of student
from every Fix the agreement mistake
students
country
shown in the diagram.
India, which have
the most Correct subject-verb agreement
has
enrolment
student
, has more than 7000 student
Change to a plural noun
students
enroll
in Wrong verb form
enrolled
University
of Correct article usage
the University
Riverview
followed by 6000 and 5000 in
Smithtown Change preposition
at
University
and Ealwood University
respectively. On the other hand
, Colombia has the lowest number
of enrolment
student
from all threeFix the agreement mistake
students
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Universities
University
, which
only Change preposition
of which
University
of Correct article usage
the University
Riverview
is
nearly 1000 Verb problem
has
student
.
For ranking of the Fix the agreement mistake
students
country
, the highest number
of enrolment
student
is India followed by Nepal, Vietnam, Fix the agreement mistake
students
Indoesia
and Colombia and the highest Correct your spelling
Indonesia
number
of enrolment
is always University
of Correct article usage
the University
Riverview
while
the ranking 2 and 3 are very competitive have
approximately the same amount in Colombia, Indonesia and Nepal Correct word choice
and have
while
Smithtown University
win
over Earlawood Change the verb form
wins
University
about 1000 in India, vise
versa in Vietnam.Change the spelling
vice
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, university, country, riverview, student, enrolment with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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