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The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural/and becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural/and becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart represents the main causes of worldwide
degradation
 of agricultural
land
 and the table illustrates the information regarding
the
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North America, Europe and Oceania being affected by
the
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land
degradation
 over the given period.
Overall
,
Over grazing
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 is the main reason
due to
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which
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why
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 agricultural
land
 becomes least productive.
Besides
, the region of Europe was majorly affected by
land
degradation
 during the 1990s.
To begin
 with,
over grazing
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overgrazing
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 is one of the main
reason
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reasons
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 accounting for
about
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about 35
percent
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per cent
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. After that, deforestation and
over cultivation
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 are the main reasons accounting for around 30
percent
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per cent
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 each. And, other reasons account for only 7
percent
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per cent
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, which is fairly low. Switching to the table, As compared to
other
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 two countries, Europe was severely affected because of
indiscriminate
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 cutting down of forests.
Secondly
, Oceania was majorly affected accounting for 13
percent
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, out of which nearly 11
percent
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per cent
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 was by
over grazing
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overgrazing
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. Out of the three countries, North America is least affected by
land
degradation
 and
thus
, accounted for only 5
percent
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per cent
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, out of which around 3
percent
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per cent
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 of
degradation
 was by
over cultivation
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over-cultivation
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.
Therefore
, the causes and reasons responsible for reducing the productivity of agricultural
land
varies
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 from region to region.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words degradation, land, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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