The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984.
The charts below depict the comparison of
population
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the population
France
and India
at different ages
in the year 1984.
It is clear that
India
saw the highest proportion of population
from the first of the age
to 25 years, while
in France
people between 10-35 ages
assigned the highest population
to themselves.
In detail, the figure for males
and females between 0-5 ages
in India
stood at approximately 7 per cent, while
that of France
was lower at about less than a fifth. The figure for women in the age
of 5-10 accounted for the percentage of about 6.%. However
, this
figure for males
was lower at almost 6%. Also
, the population
of males
in France
at the age
of 5-10 was more than the females about less than a quarter and 3.5% respectively.
In France
, the population
of people from 10-35 ages
were almost equal, while
that of India
decreased significantly from 6% to 3.5%. Also
, the lowest proportion of the population
in France
was more than 85%, whereas
, that of India
was between 650-70. In addition
, the age
of 35-60 was the middle of the population
among males
and females in both countries.Submitted by www.marzieh.eidi on
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