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the maps below show changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times

the maps below show changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times
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The maps illustrate the development of the Spanish
city
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 of Castellon from 2000 to the present.
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, the
city
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 has expanded with new residential and commercial areas, improved transport facilities, and significant changes to existing structures. In 2000, the
university
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, train
station
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, and old market were located around the
city
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center
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centre
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. A road ran opposite the port, and woodland was situated in the northeast of the
city
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, approximately 20 miles to the right of the
university
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. Twenty-four years later, the woodland
has been
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 replaced by a new shopping
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center
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centre
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, and a hall of residence
has been
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 built to the left of the
university
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. The train
station
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 has been relocated, and a new police
station
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 now occupies its former location,
while
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 the old train
station
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 remains in the
city
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center
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centre
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. A new tramline now connects the
city
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center
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centre
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 with the
university
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. An airport is under construction in the east of the
city
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. The old market has been replaced by a new shop, now located in the west of the
city
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. The
city
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center
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centre
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, previously an empty area, is now used for a bike rental scheme.
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, a new covered market has been constructed to the right of the
city
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center
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, and the main road has been converted into a pedestrian road.
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, in the south of the
city
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, new cinemas, bars, and clubs have been established.

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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, university, station, center with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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