A neighbour has damaged your car while parking his/her car in the lane in front of your house. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter: Explain why you’re writing Describe the damage to your car and express your feelings about it Recommend what steps he/she should take to resolve the situation

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Dear Mr. Paul, I am Rajwant Singh, I just moved

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your

neighborhood

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last

month. I am writing

this

letter to tell you that

last

night you accidentally hit my car from the front

while

you were parking in front of my house, and I would like you to call your insurance company regarding

this

issue. Ivan

surprised

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as I was on my way to work when I heard

rattling

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sound

came

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from my front right

tire

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, and I noticed that my brake router was broken and had

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bend

tire

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rims. It was not safe to drive like that, so I called 911 and asked for help. Not

just

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that, I had to postpone my important meeting. It is totally understandable that it was torrential rain

last

night

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and zero visibility.

Thus

this

could

be happen

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However

, it would be great if you call your insurance company

and

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report

them

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about

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this

incident, and ask for compensation. They may need pictures of both cars. My contact and email address are attached. I am waiting to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, Raj

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Revise the opening paragraph for clarity. Mention there a specific purpose of your writing before diving into details about the accident.

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Provide more specific details about the damage and make the issues related to safety clearer to stress on the urgency.

suitable writing tone

The tone of the letter is polite and understanding despite the inconvenience caused.

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The letter effectively explains the situation and provides a practical solution to resolve it.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

183 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

6.5

Logical structure

6.5

Single idea per paragraph

7.5

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

7.5

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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scratches
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broken mirrors
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feelings
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