The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
The bar chart shows information about the percentages of frequency of citizens who eat fast
food
in restaurants over 10 years from 2003 to 2013 in The USA. Overall
, most people
had average
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an average
time
to consume fast food
once a week
and once or twice a month. Meanwhile,
less people
ate junk food
everyday
and never.
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every day
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beginning of the period shown, the most popular Change preposition
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time
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week
at approximately 32%, then
once or twice a month at 30%. Followed, several times a week
and a few times a year were equally get
the same percentage between 14%-16%.
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, In terms of 2006, firstly
, the highest spot of frequent time
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food
in restaurants in the USA is people
who eat once a week
which was around 33%. Next,
the middle position was followed by people
who attend
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week
which was around 20%.
Moving to 2013, the first ranked
percentage of citizens in The USA who order junk Add a hyphen
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food
once in
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week
is about 30%, continued with several a week
and once a month at 16%, and15%, respectively.
Lastly
, the rate of time
eating fast food
everyday
and never had the same pattern in all year with just below 5%Replace the word
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