The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
The bar chart shows information about the percentages of frequency of citizens who eat fast
food
in restaurants over 10 years from 2003 to 2013 in The USA. Use synonyms
Overall
, most Linking Words
people
had Use synonyms
average
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an average
time
to consume fast Use synonyms
food
once a Use synonyms
week
and once or twice a month. Meanwhile,
less Use synonyms
people
ate junk Use synonyms
food
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everyday
and never.
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every day
The
beginning of the period shown, the most popular Change preposition
At the
time
to purchase junk Use synonyms
food
was once Use synonyms
in
a Change preposition
apply
week
at approximately 32%, Use synonyms
then
once or twice a month at 30%. Followed, several times a Linking Words
week
and a few times a year were equally Use synonyms
get
the same percentage between 14%-16%.
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Moreover
, In terms of 2006, Linking Words
firstly
, the highest spot of frequent Linking Words
time
in Use synonyms
people
who Use synonyms
attend to
eat fast Verb problem
apply
food
in restaurants in the USA is Use synonyms
people
who eat once a Use synonyms
week
which was around 33%. Use synonyms
Next,
the middle position was followed by Linking Words
people
who Use synonyms
attend
several times a Wrong verb form
attended
week
which was around 20%.
Moving to 2013, the Use synonyms
first ranked
percentage of citizens in The USA who order junk Add a hyphen
first-ranked
food
once Use synonyms
in
a Change preposition
apply
week
is about 30%, continued with several a Use synonyms
week
and once a month at 16%, and15%, respectively.
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Lastly
, the rate of Linking Words
time
eating fast Use synonyms
food
Use synonyms
everyday
and never had the same pattern in all year with just below 5%Replace the word
every day
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