The charts below show the percentages of volunteers by organizations in 2008 and 2014.
The present bar charts compare data about the proportion of people who were volunteers by organizations in 6 different items in 2008 and 2014.
Overall
, in the first year, the main things that the population applied for were education
and Environment instead
of Health care. In addition
, in the second year, all items except education
were the same as the first one, but education
altered with sport.
According to
the 2008 diagram, the main reason for which people wanted to work was Education
at 24%; then
environment and Art were the most famous with 21, and 18 per cent; moreover
, the number of Others was equal to sport at 15%; however
, the last
thing that people do not like it was health care.
The given plot in 2014 demonstrates education
could not be at the same level as in 2008 because reduced to the third item by 17% , yet environment and sport climbed by nearly 10%, which got the first and second level. Also
, Art and Others like education
had a 6 per cent fall; although
, the last
category was roughly the same as in 2008.Submitted by maryamkazemi968 on
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