The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.

The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.
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The bar chart compares the amount of
expenditure
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of France and the
UK
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on cars, computers, books, perfume and cameras in 2010.
Overall
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, the
UK
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spent more money on the four categories than the French in the time period.
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, only figures for the French are shown as greater than the
UK
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in 2010. As the chart reveals, obviously the
UK
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had slightly more bought cameras than the French with approximately 35000
pounds
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sterling, compared to around 15000
pounds
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for France's people. Obviously, books and car
expenditure
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of both countries purchased the most money spent.
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, the figures for books in the
UK
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and the French were exactly the same as those for car
expenditure
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, at around 35000 and 40000
pounds
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sterling, respectively.
By contrast
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, France's people and humans of the
UK
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purchased computers for 37000 and 35000
pounds
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sterling, respectively.
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, the indicator was the
expenditure
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of perfume of the French and the
UK
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just around 200000 and 150000
pounds
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, respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words expenditure, uk, pounds with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • consumer goods
  • chart
  • countries
  • overall
  • compare
  • analyze
  • categories
  • consumer spending
  • trends
  • proportions
  • statistics
  • increase
  • decrease
  • significant
  • notable
  • remarkable
  • substantial
  • considerable
  • determine
  • conclude
  • in conclusion
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