The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.

The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.
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The graph illustrates how many
people
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took part in different activities in Melbourne and Australia from 2000 to 2020.
Overall
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, it is evident that, after two decades,
people
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showed an upward tendency towards table tennis and musical performances,
while
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the number of those enthusiasts about amateur dramatics went down. Notably, the film club was the most famous among other activities. In 2000, the film club enjoyed 60
participants
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, which saw a slight decline to 60 by 2010.
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, it rose dramatically to well above 60
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in 2020, making it the most common activity among
people
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throughout the two decades. In comparison, the figure for martial arts experienced fluctuations between 30 and 40 attendees in the same period. Moving on to table tennis, it had just below 20 attendees in 2000, where it flattened out after showing a steady rise to almost 50
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in 2020, outrunning martial arts and taking second place in the figure. Musical performances,
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, had no
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taking part in it from 2005 to 2010, before soaring significantly to more than 10
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a year in 2020. The amateur dramatics,
on the other hand
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, had approximately 25 attendees in 2000 and plummeted to almost 20 and no greater than 10
people
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in 2010 and 2020, respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, participants with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • participants
  • social centre
  • comparison
  • trends
  • consistently popular
  • gained popularity
  • lost popularity
  • community interest
  • availability of facilities
  • social factors
  • economic factors
  • external events
  • economic downturns
  • health crises
  • demographic changes
  • aging population
  • marketing
  • community outreach programs
  • participation rates
  • Melbourne
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