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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear..., You should write at least 150 words.

#minutes #friend #drive #advice #licence #school #guidance #tips #addresses
Dear Bala, In
todays
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today's
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 world driving
licence
 is
one
 of
most
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the most
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 important
ID
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IDs
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 to have in your wallet. So let me explain
you
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to you
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advantages
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the advantages
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 of that and how you can apply for
one
.
Driving
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A driving
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Licence
 as a valid or authorised ID issued by
thr
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the
 government of India is
one
 of the most important
one
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ones
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 to have in your wallet
,
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apply
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 So that
your
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you
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 are
leagelly
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legally
 allowed
too
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to
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 drive any
vechicle
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vehicle
. To apply for a driving
licence
 you must first get a Learners Permit, which you can enquire
in
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about in
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 Star Driving school. They provided me with a great
sevice
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service
, where
i
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I
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 got my
licence
 within a week after my driving test. During your driving test, check for all safety procedures including
bukling
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buckling
bulking
 up seat belt. once the instructor asked you to start
drive
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driving
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 with
confident
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confidence
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. follow all the rules and do not get nervous.
Finally
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Finally,
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 park the
vechicle
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vehicle
 as per the instruction by
instructor
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the instructor
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. All the best! With love and regards, SR
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complete response
Try to elaborate more on how a driving license is advantageous. Specific details can help strengthen your argument.
logical structure
Pay attention to spelling and grammatical errors, such as 'todays' to 'today's' or 'leagelly' to 'legally'. They can slightly affect coherence and overall readability.
single idea per paragraph
Ensure each paragraph contains a single clear idea. Group related information together logically for better flow.
suitable writing tone
Polite and friendly tone that suits the context of writing to a friend.
greeting and closing
Good structure overall with clear paragraphs and greeting/closing.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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