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The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps above illustrate the changes made to the
village
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 of
Ryemouth
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Tynemouth
 from the year 1995 to
present
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the present
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days
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day
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. The
village
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 is separated into three sectors by two roads
disecting
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dissecting
 in the middle of the
village
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. Over the years, more
amenties
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amenities
,
such
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 as golf, tennis court and car park, were built. To the east of the road housed the
farm land
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farmland
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 and forest park in 1995, which was developed into a golf place and two tennis
court
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courts
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 nowadays. A road was extended to the west side of the
village
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 to
accomodate
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accommodate
 more housing in the north part of the
village
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. For the south side of the
village
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, which is connected to the sea,
it
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apply
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used to house the fish
marlet
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market
 and numerous shops related to the fishing port at the coast. Now, both shops and fish
market
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markets
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 are replaced by numerous restaurants and apartments upon the demolishment of the fishing port. To the
southern east
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southerneast
 of the
village
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, the hotel has
an
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had an
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 extension of
car
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the car
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 park over the years.

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Linking words: Add more linking words.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words village with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • development
  • village
  • Ryemouth
  • 1995
  • present
  • houses
  • small school
  • residential areas
  • amenities
  • population
  • increased
  • growth
  • expansion
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