Nowadays, there is a rapid increase of rubbish amounts all around the world. What are the main causes for it? What can be a solution, in your opinion?

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in my point of view, every year more and more garbage is generated in the world. t
trush
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trust
this
problem will be more harmful if we can not stop at
normal
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level. We
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every day made of inorganic materials. The most important
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inorganic material is
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and
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daily
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life.
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, adults and children frequently
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new makeup
things
and too many clothes, shoes,
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because they can
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just only one
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then
can be
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. If we throw out a few rubbish every day in the
enviroment
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environment
one year later
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be happen big accident
our
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global.
this
trash will bigger and we can not
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. The proliferation of
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plastics and disposable items adds significantly to waste a large portion of produced food is wasted, contributing to the
overal
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overall
waste problem. Encouraging people to buy less, choose products with minimal packaging, and opt for reusable items can help reduce waste.
Nonetheless
,technology is
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improve
improved
every day. We must pay attention
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things
in daily life.We must protect our world and living places.
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people protect
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environment
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they live in their famous European countries.
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is yet not harmed and the environment is still
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eligible
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. all in all, we must protect to balance. We must
use
things
more carefully. We should not buy
things
we will not
use
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coherence cohesion
Work on introducing clear paragraphs with distinct points to improve logical structure.
task achievement
Provide more specific examples and explanations to support your main points.
coherence cohesion
Ensure all sentences are complete and clear, avoiding fragments or run-ons.
coherence cohesion
The essay conveys some pertinent ideas about the causes and solutions for the increase in rubbish.
task achievement
You make a valid point about the impact of inorganic materials and single-use plastics.
coherence cohesion
Ending with a call to action about protecting the environment is a strong conclusion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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