The maps below show the changes in a town after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam from 1990 to 2010.

The maps below show the changes in a town after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam from 1990 to 2010.
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The diagram illustrates data about the structural changes that
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experienced
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over a 20-year period, from 1990 to 2010,
as a result
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of the construction of a hydroelectric power dam.
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witnessed radical changes with the most noticeable being the disappearance of many natural areas and the construction of some electricity from 1990 to 2010. In 1990, in the northwest of the city, where the forest is located, there were
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ancient structures. In the west of the
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, there was a habitat of rare animals and plants.
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, the main housing of the
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was located in the east of the
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around irrigated farmlands.
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the data, in the year 2010, the
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expanded to include a hydroelectric dam in the north of the river, which separates it from a lake. The dam was
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contained by two mountains on both sides.
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, other than the village houses, all land next to the river was replaced by power lines transferring electricity.
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, in the northeast of the
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, there was a recently constructed hotel facing the lake.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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