The maps below show the changes in a town after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam from 1990 to 2010.

The maps below show the changes in a town after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam from 1990 to 2010.
The diagram illustrates data about the structural changes that
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in a
town
over a 20-year period, from 1990 to 2010,
as a result
of the construction of a hydroelectric power dam.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
town
witnessed radical changes with the most noticeable being the disappearance of many natural areas and the construction of some electricity from 1990 to 2010. In 1990, in the northwest of the city, where the forest is located, there were
also
ancient structures. In the west of the
town
, there was a habitat of rare animals and plants.
Moreover
, the main housing of the
town
was located in the east of the
town
around irrigated farmlands.
According to
the data, in the year 2010, the
town
expanded to include a hydroelectric dam in the north of the river, which separates it from a lake. The dam was
also
contained by two mountains on both sides.
In addition
, other than the village houses, all land next to the river was replaced by power lines transferring electricity.
Lastly
, in the northeast of the
town
, there was a recently constructed hotel facing the lake.
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