Some companies sponsor sports and sports stars as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Sports

play a crucial role in people's lives

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around the world. Some enterprises

sponsor

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Sportsmen

and

sports

events in order to promote their

Products

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some people believe

this

is beneficial

while

others say that it has drawbacks.

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essay discusses both viewpoints and I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons. On the one hand,

sportsmen

's

Sponsor

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bring numerous benefits to

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athletes

coupled with

the country because the government Should not invert

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money

for all the

Sportsmen

, so large

companies

are Sponsered to these people to

practice

and Coaching.

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is,

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athletes

Promote

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Product

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through the

advertisment

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advertisement

, and

as a result

,

sports

player

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players

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will get a bulk amount from employers, so it helps

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the player

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player

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players

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to get

practice

regularly. Taking India,

for example

,

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athletes

usually get sponsorship from large enterprises and

this

is a "win-win" Policy

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both

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, Particularly the famous cricketer, Mr Sachin Tendulkar is a brand ambassador of the "Boost energy drinks. Needless to say, getting

sponsor

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from

companies

bring

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brings

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numerous

privalage

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privileges

and it is a good way.

On the other hand

, getting Sponsorship from

manufactures

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Creates some detrimental drawbacks to

Sports

players because

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athletes

always depend on a Sometimes

companies

will

be given

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to

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the

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unhealthy,

danger

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and cheating

products

too which

Sports

engage a large number of the population, So

athlets

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athletes

only promote good

products

rather than bad.

For instance

,

sports

players when they set

Sponsor

from enterprises, and it is limited

money

along with

it is not

gurantee

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guaranteed

guarantee

,

consequently

,

sportsmen

always be in

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edge of the knives.

Then

, receiving bulk

money

companies

have more drawbacks. In conclusion,

although

athlet's

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training

Practice

will be constantly without

stop

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when they have

Sponsers

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Sponsors

from Corporates,

sportsmen

always depend on Someone who

give

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money

to

him

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and Promote bad

products

through Sponsorship.

However

, in my opinion, about

this

, getting sponsors from

Companies

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can lead to

do

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Practice

and training for

athlets

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athletes

, and

this

is a good method.