You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have bought a new camera but when you got it home you found it had some problems. You returned the camera and spoke to the company representative a week ago but the camera has still not been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: introduce yourself explain the situation say what action you would like the company to take You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to inform you that I am really

dissapointed

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disappointed

with your service because

i

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I

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returned

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the

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new camera for

repaired

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but could not get a single word from your staff ,it has been over a week now. My name is

roop

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Roop

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, and

i

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have been a loyal customer

to

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of

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your company for many years . I live close to your

shope

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shop

and each member of our family

buy

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buys

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electronic devices from your store . I never had issues before with your company service . I bought

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camera as a gift for my brother's birthday .Unfortunately , It has many faults like

screen

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the screen

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keep

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keeps

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on getting frozen ,

picture

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the picture

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quality is low and

lens

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the lens

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also

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is also

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not stable .

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, I asked one of your staff

member

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members

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to

fixed

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fix

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it and please inform me as soon as

when

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the

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repaired

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repair

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done

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is done

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but it has been over

a

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apply

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two weeks

I

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since I

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did

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not

heared

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hear

heard

a single word from your company . I would like you to work on

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matter as soon as possible .If it will take one more week

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i

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I

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would like to refund my money back and compensate my time with a gift card as per your policy states. I would like to suggest that you need to provide training to your service team to check all the

equipments

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equipment

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weekly so that

customer

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customers

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do not need to face problems in the future. Look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Roopkamal Kaur.