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The chart above give information about different types of waste disposed of in one country in 1960 and 2021.

The chart above give information about different types of waste disposed of in one country in 1960 and 2021.
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The pie graphs illustrate how various types of
waste
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 were disposed of in one country between 1960 and 2021.
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, the greatest proportion of disposal
waste
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 was allocated to paper,
although
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 it slightly decreased
at the end
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 of the period.
Moreover
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, the share of food ,wood, and plastic witnessed a noticeable improvement in the given periods,
while
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 that for glass and green
waste
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 remained unchanged. Paper accounted for a quarter of the total and it slightly declined by 10%. By 2011, textiles and other types of
waste
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 had been disposed of
initially
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, yet in 2011
this
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 figure minimally dropped by 6 and 5 per cent, respectively. In 1960, the figure for disposal wood experienced a minimal rise (4 per cent), which was twice as high as its original value. Food and plastic made up 12 and 8% of disposal
waste
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, respectively, before it significantly increased in 2011. The percentage of glass, green
waste
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, and metal almost remained stable over the given period.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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