The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.
The line graph below shows how the
prices
of
nickel
, copper, and zinc changed in 2014.
Overall
,
Nickel
prices
started the year with the highest percentage
change
and ended it with the smallest,
whereas
, an opposite trend was noticed with the
prices
of Zinc, and copper costs fluctuating. Notably, All three metals were at their lowest cost in June, after which the
prices
stabilized for the next 3 months. In January, the price of
Nickel
was up by six
percent
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;
However
, in the following months, the cost of the metal dropped significantly, reaching its lowest in June, at a -3%. Following the brief stable period,
Nickel
ended the year with a 1%
change
in cost.
On the other hand
, the price of Zinc reached its vertex in February, at a 3 percentile increase, and its lowest point in June, at -1%. With regards to the percentile
change
in the value of copper, at its peak it experienced a 2% increase, and at its lowest point, a drop of -0.5%. By the end of the year, only a little over 1% of
change
its price was noticed.
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  • average monthly change
  • prices of metals
  • trend
  • spike
  • fluctuation
  • increase
  • decrease
  • sharp rise
  • sharp fall
  • stability
  • volatility
  • data points
  • comparison
  • contrast
  • external factors
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