The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Given two maps, one from 2007 and the other from 2010 show the differences
of
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in
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leading to the
city
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hospital. In general, the hospital
road
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was surrounded by a parking lot around the centre, 6 bus stops and a bus station.
First,
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according to
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both descriptions, the
city
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hospital was located in the middle and a ring lane was built in the north of the clinic. In 2007, the hospital roadway to the south of
this
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institution and its surroundings were equipped with accessible 3 bus stops,
while
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in 2010,
this
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thoroughfare was closed from the west with two roundabouts. To the west of the hospice
road
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, to the north of the
city
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road
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, there was a car place used by both staff and the public. In 2010,
this
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park was moved to the east of the ward, where the public could only park their cars and the area used by the staff was right next to the clinic
road
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.
To sum up
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,
while
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the
city
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clinic remained stable, the parking spaces around it have been moved to divergent areas.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words city, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic flow
  • road access
  • ring road
  • bus stops
  • bus station
  • congestion
  • parking facilities
  • pedestrian crossings
  • vehicular flow
  • organizational structure
  • accessibility
  • enhancements
  • configuration
  • dedicated
  • diverting traffic
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