The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates four different
transportation
of supplies in
million
tonnes
in Britain between 1974 and 2002. An initial analysis reveals that, despite being in different patterns, there was an increase in the amount of goods transported
in
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all means of transport in the
period
analyzed.
Overall
, the primary
transportation
of products throughout the
period
was the road. Despite four categories
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an increase over the whole
period
, rail exhibited a fluctuation.
Firstly
,
road
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the road
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led the modes of
transportation
over the
period
, with approximately 70
million
tones
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transported in 1974.
Although
experiencing a slight dip around 1982, it increased steadily to 100
million
tonnes
in 2002.
In contrast
,
pipeline
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exhibited the least used
transportation
of goods, with less than half
million
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a million
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tonnes
in 1974,
then
increasing to just over 20
million
tonnes
since
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1995 to 2002.
On the other hand
, the number of
tonnes
of products transported by water started at just under 40
million
, rising to nearly 60
million
from 1978 to 1982 and remaining relatively constant until 1998,
then
reaching
to
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over that number in 2002.
Conversely
, rail
transportation
exhibited a steady variation, dropping from 40
million
tonnes
in 1974 to about 30
million
in 1995, and
then
increasing again to over 40
million
tonnes
by 2002.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words transportation, million, tonnes, period with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Overview
  • Trend
  • Fluctuation
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Stability
  • Mode of transport
  • Quantity
  • Comparison
  • Goods
  • Transported
  • Significant
  • Noticeable
  • General trend
  • Time span
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