The bar chart shows the number of visitors to three London Museums between 2007 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar diagram displays the number of tourists who went
sight seeing
at the National Correct your spelling
sightseeing
gallery
, Victoria and Albert Capitalize word
Gallery
Museum
and British museum
from 2007 to 2012. Capitalize word
Museum
Overall
it is immediately apparent that visitors
to the National gallery
increased over the period.
Looking at the chart, Capitalize word
Gallery
National
Correct article usage
the National
gallery
which was the least popular amongst the 3 sceneries with about 7 Capitalize word
Gallery
million
visitors
in 2007 saw a rise in the number of visitors
reaching a value of approximately 17 million
making the place the most visited site in 2012. Although
Victoria
and Albert Correct article usage
the Victoria
Museum
had the highest number of tourists in 2007, 2008 and 2009, that scenary
was the least patronised in 2012.
Turning to Correct your spelling
scenery
scenario
British
Correct article usage
the British
Museum
, there were fluctuations in the people who went sight seeing
there. 2007 witnessed about 13 Correct your spelling
sightseeing
million
visitors
. Over the next 2 years, this
figure fell to a little lower than half at around 6 million
. However
, the next 3 years saw an
rise reaching nearly 15 Change the article
a
million
tourists in 2012.Submitted by nmaureen03 on
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