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The chart illustrates the comparison of various types of energy generation in France namely coal, gas, petro, nuclear and the other energy over the period of 10 years starting in 1995.

The chart illustrates the comparison of various types of energy generation in France namely coal, gas, petro, nuclear and the other energy over the period of 10 years starting in 1995.
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The collation of diverse types of
energy
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generation
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 in France comprising coal,
gas
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,petrol,nuclear and other
energy
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 between the years 1995 and 2005 is depicted in the chart given.
Overall
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,the
energy
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generation
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 in 2005 is more discrete compared to in 1995.Two of the highest per cent of
energy
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production
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 ,which is coal and
gas
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 almost have not varied over the 10-year period.
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 with,the proportion of
energy
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generation
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 petro produced inclined substantially with about 10% which is the greatest percentage change.
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 a moderate variation in
energy
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production
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 was seen in coal and
gas
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,the
energy
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generation
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 in
gas
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 grew slightly,
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,
in contrast
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 to
gas
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,it is seen that
energy
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production
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 in coal decreased gradually.
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,the availability of
energy
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production
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 via nuclear and others escalated respectively by 4% and 5% from 1995 to 2005.The lowest percentage was observed in the
energy
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production
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 of
gas
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 with approximately 0.50% in spite of the bigness of the sector it covers.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, generation, gas, production with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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