The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
The provided table and charts represent the information about various
sources
of the police budget and how it Use synonyms
distributed
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was distributed
in particular
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area
of Britain in 2017 and 2018, indicated in Fix the agreement mistake
areas
million
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euros
and percentages, respectively.
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Overall
, it can be clearly observed that the majority of the police's funding Linking Words
come
from the government Correct subject-verb agreement
comes
along with
largely distributed on Linking Words
salaries
for the offices and staff in both years.
Starting in 2017, at 175.5 Use synonyms
million
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Euros
was the largest sum among all Use synonyms
sources
, followed by Local taxes and others Use synonyms
such
as grants, at 91.2 Linking Words
million
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euros
and Use synonyms
at
38 Change preposition
apply
million
Use synonyms
euros
, respectively. Use synonyms
Moreover
, in terms of how they spent can be categorized into three main categories: Linking Words
Salaries
, Technology, and Building and transport in which three Use synonyms
forth
of the revenues were paid as Correct your spelling
fourth
a
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a salary
salaries
salaries
. Use synonyms
Following
by Wrong verb form
Followed
budget
for buildings and transport was accounted for Correct article usage
the budget
on
17%, Change preposition
apply
whereas
that of technology was almost halved of its figure.
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However
, in 2018, it is interesting to note that similar trends in both Linking Words
sources
and distribution can be noticed with some minor changes introduced. The Use synonyms
budgets
was slightly increased Fix the agreement mistake
budget
in
each Change preposition
for
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sources
. On the other Change to a singular noun
source
hands
, technology Fix the agreement mistake
hand
gain
more attention and replaced some percentages from Wrong verb form
gained
salaries
with Use synonyms
additional
6% of its previous Correct article usage
an additional
years'
figure.Change noun form
year's
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sources, million, euros, salaries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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