The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
The provided table and charts represent the information about various
sources
of the police budget and how it
distributed
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in particular
area
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areas
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of Britain in 2017 and 2018, indicated in
million
euros
and percentages, respectively.
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that the majority of the police's funding
come
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from the government
along with
largely distributed on
salaries
for the offices and staff in both years. Starting in 2017, at 175.5
million
Euros
was the largest sum among all
sources
, followed by Local taxes and others
such
as grants, at 91.2
million
euros
and
at
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38
million
euros
, respectively.
Moreover
, in terms of how they spent can be categorized into three main categories:
Salaries
, Technology, and Building and transport in which three
forth
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of the revenues were paid as
a
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a salary
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salaries
.
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by
budget
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for buildings and transport was accounted for
on
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17%,
whereas
that of technology was almost halved of its figure.
However
, in 2018, it is interesting to note that similar trends in both
sources
and distribution can be noticed with some minor changes introduced. The
budgets
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was slightly increased
in
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each
sources
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. On the other
hands
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, technology
gain
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more attention and replaced some percentages from
salaries
with
additional
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an additional
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6% of its previous
years'
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figure.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sources, million, euros, salaries with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • budget allocation
  • funding sources
  • government policies
  • economic conditions
  • community services
  • crime prevention
  • public safety
  • significant increase/decrease
  • distribution
  • assessment
  • reflection
  • allocation shifts
  • budget comparison
  • impact analysis
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