The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010
The two pictures
are illustrating
the construction differences made for Wrong verb form
illustrate
entrance
to the Add an article
the entrance
city
hospital in 2010 than in
2007.
Both maps Change preposition
apply
there is
Verb problem
show
city
Correct article usage
a city
road
runs
along the southern area Correct pronoun usage
that runs
and
Correct word choice
apply
it
crossed by the hospital Correct your spelling
is
road
and it
connected with the ring Correct your spelling
is
road
which runs around the city
hospital. But,in 2010, they have created two roundabouts and first one at the junction of the city
road
and hospital road
and the second one at the hospital road
and ring road
junction. Also
, they construct a bus station in 2010, at the left side of hospital road
between ring road
and city
road
and also
joined to the both roundabouts. Furthermore
, the bus stops beside the hospital road
in 2007 ,has been destroyed.
In 2007,the car park which was opened to both staff and public at the right side of the hospital road
among the ring road
city
road
has been constructed as staff car park and additionally
, a public car park designed at the eastern area of the city
hospital just bordered the ring road
.
In a nutshell, there is clear huge construction viwe than in 2007 and 2010.Submitted by amalitharangani0Most of villagers are changing their accommodations from villages to cities all around the world. As a result of this countryside residents are lower than town areas.I think this is a negative development and in this essay, I will elaborate my perspectives furthermore.
According to this situation, my take on this is, different of the facilities between the town and the village. As an example, there are lots of shopping centres in the city such as house- hold items, clothes, stationeries, vehicles and so on. Conversely, developed educational centres, schools, hospitals with enough facilities are also at the urban areas. Nevertheless, there are lots of companies and unlimited job opportunities in the city area. Also, mostly there are continuous electricity, gas,water and well planned and punctual transport system as well. So people prefer to live in comfortably and moving to cities as they possible.
Additionally, villagers and town people's have same basic need. Such as food, accommodation, education, good health and freedom as well. In some countries there is unavailable electricity in the countryside. Also, there is poor transport system, teachers and facilities at village schools. Moreover, sometimes not enough medications and human resources. So countryside people preferred to move to town. Finally, countryside population decreased and urbanisation in cities.
In a nutshell, if there is as usual same facilities all over the city and rural areas,as there is lots of freedom in the countryside . My point of view is around the world this point is most prominent in developing countries.
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