The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010
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The two pictures
are illustrating
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illustrate
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the construction differences made for
entrance
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the entrance
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to the
city
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hospital in 2010
than in
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apply
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2007. Both maps
there is
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show
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city
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a city
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road
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runs
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that runs
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along the southern area
and
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apply
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it
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is
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crossed by the hospital
road
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and
it
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is
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connected with the ring
road
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which runs around the
city
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hospital. But,in 2010, they have created two roundabouts and first one at the junction of the
city
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road
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and hospital
road
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and the second one at the hospital
road
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and ring
road
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junction.
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, they construct a bus station in 2010, at the left side of hospital
road
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between ring
road
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and
city
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road
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and
also
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joined to the both roundabouts.
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, the bus stops beside the hospital
road
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in 2007 ,has been destroyed. In 2007,the car park which was opened to both staff and public at the right side of the hospital
road
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among the ring
road
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city
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road
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has been constructed as staff car park and
additionally
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, a public car park designed at the eastern area of the
city
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hospital just bordered the ring
road
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. In a nutshell, there is clear huge construction viwe than in 2007 and 2010.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • dual carriageway
  • roundabout
  • traffic flow
  • multi-story car park
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian provisions
  • footpaths
  • traffic signals
  • construction phase
  • ambulances
  • carriageway expansion
  • traffic congestion
  • pedestrian crossings
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure development
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