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The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. K Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. K Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given two maps illustrate how the village
Ryemouth
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of Ryemouth
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 was changed from 1995 to
current
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the current
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 time
It is clear that
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 the forest park and farmland
to
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for
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 golf
tennis
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and tennis
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,
as well as
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fishing
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the fishing
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 port
was
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apply
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disappeared and
road
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a road
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 was constructed near houses. Looking
to
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at
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 the second picture, shops and fish
market
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markets
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 were changed to
restaurant
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restaurants
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 and some apartments respectively.Another notable thing that
near located
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nearby
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area
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areas
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 of houses and
hotel
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hotels
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 was added some count of houses and were built car parking

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Residential Area: Neighborhoods where people live.
  • Commercial Development: Construction of business-related buildings like shops and offices.
  • Infrastructure: Fundamental facilities like roads, public transport, etc.
  • Recreational Area: Spaces dedicated to sports, parks, and other leisure activities.
  • Connectivity: The state of being connected or interconnected.
  • Natural Landscape: The visible features of an area of land in terms of hills, forests, lakes, etc.
  • Conservation Efforts: Actions taken to preserve and protect the environment.
  • Expansion: The process of becoming larger or more extensive.
  • Amenities: Useful features or facilities of a place.
  • Development: The process of developing or being developed, especially within a mapped area.
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