The graph shows electricity production (in terawatt hours) in France between 1980 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows electricity production (in terawatt hours) in France between 1980 and 2012.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph delineates the source of
electricity
manufacturing in France from 1980 to 2012.
Overall
, it is apparent that the
electricity
production by source in France fluctuated wildly. To be more specific,
while
the data
of
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electricity
from nuclear and renewable sources were rising in
this
period, the figures for thermal and hydroelectric production were decreasing over time. Between 1980 and 2012, the
electricity
in France mainly came from nuclear plants.
Moreover
, nuclear
electricity
production tended to grow in
this
period.
This
tendency can be easily seen from the chart that the figures increased dramatically from 50TW-h in 1980 to 400TW-h in 2012. Sharing the same trend, the manufacturing rate of renewable sources of
electricity
also
gradually rose up to 25% in 2012 despite staying at 0TW-h
in
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20 years.
However
, the data
of
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electricity
which
made
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of thermal and hydroelectric energy tended to decline in
this
period.
This
trend is evident in the chart that from 1980 to 2012, the figures for thermal and hydroelectric decreased from 70TW-h to 50TW-h and from 124TW-h to 45TW-h respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, tw-h with synonyms.
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