The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The present maps compare the Norbinton industrial zone that will develop in the future.

Overall

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, Today

this

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area has some factories;

however

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, in the future,

this

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district will evolve and connect to the city;

as a result

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, people will be able to live in

this

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region.

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the picture, presently,

this

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area does not have any equipment because we can see a main

square

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in which some factories are around it;

moreover

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this

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square

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has two roads one of them for connection to the highway, and another one let use to join to other companies.

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, In the future, we can see the

last

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plane except the big

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destroyed;

thereafter

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, the road will become 3.

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, around the

square

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that has three manufacturers will have a Medical Centre and shops.

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this

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district will be developing and getting a bridge over the river;

furthermore

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, on the old road that has some factories, we will have a house, School, and Playground.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

163 words

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