The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site

Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The present maps compare the Norbinton industrial zone that will develop in the future.
Overall
, Today
this
area has some factories;
however
, in the future,
this
district will evolve and connect to the city;
as a result
, people will be able to live in
this
region.
According to
the picture, presently,
this
area does not have any equipment because we can see a main
square
in which some factories are around it;
moreover
,
this
square
has two roads one of them for connection to the highway, and another one let use to join to other companies.
Nevertheless
, In the future, we can see the
last
plane except the big
square
destroyed;
thereafter
, the road will become 3.
Also
, around the
square
that has three manufacturers will have a Medical Centre and shops.
In addition
,
this
district will be developing and getting a bridge over the river;
furthermore
, on the old road that has some factories, we will have a house, School, and Playground.
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