22.Governments should ban dangerous sports. Others think that people should have the freedom to do any sport activity. Discuss both side and give your opinion

Goverments

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Governments

are playing a big part

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many sections

in

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a nation. One of them is about

sport

.

While

,

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there is a statement

say

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that Governments should ban extreme

sports

, I side with those who feel that folks should not restricted

to play

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any

sport

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activity. On the one hand, it could argued that

humans

should not

doing

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do

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dangerous

sports

because it can

caused

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two negative effects.

Firstly

, when they are doing

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extreme

sport

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sports

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, it can

enhanced

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the risk of getting

injury

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. When individuals are playing a road race

for

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example, the chance of

crash

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accident

increased

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as they

should

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drive their motorcycle

in

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high speed.

Secondly

, some of the extreme

sports

do not have a

number

of certificate instructors.

Consequently

, people who

doing

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those

sports

hardly

to

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do that in the correct way.

On the other hand

, I believe

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those who think that

humans

should have the freedom to do any

sport

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sports

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activity for two main reasons.

To begin

with, if people do

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dangerous

sport

, it can

increasing

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the

number

of adrenaline

on

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their

body

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bodies

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. Because the

number

of adrenaline

up

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, individuals will earn some happiness than doing a usual

sport

.

For instance

, after playing

mix

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martial

art

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, the stress level of

individual

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individuals

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will

decreased

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as they can unwind

with

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by

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punching the board when they do that

sport

.

Then

, some extreme

sports

can make the connection

of

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humans

and nature as many of them are outdoor

activity

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activities

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. To explain

this

, when folks do paragliding, they can feel fresh air.

Furthermore

, they can look up the town from the sky. In conclusion,

while

most

of

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apply

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extreme

sports

can

make

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humans

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human

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getting an injury,

it

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they

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can

make increasing

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increase

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the

number

of adrenaline

on

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people's

body

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bodies

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.

Therefore

, on balance, I remain firmly convinced that the idea

on

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banning extreme

sports

should be abolished.