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The graph below shows how elderly people in the United States spent their free time between 1980 and 2010.

The graph below shows how elderly people in the United States spent their free time between 1980 and 2010.
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The given graph introduces some listed
activities
 which old people did in their leisure time, covering a specific period of time from 1980 to 2010 in America. It is obvious that the popularity of the
activities
 experienced a direct proportionality with respect to time, particularly, hiking was on its way to surge steadily
as well as
 a dramatic rise in watching TV. In
1980s
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, approximately all
activities
sew
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saw
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 a gradual escalation. In
case
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 of going to
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the theater
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theater
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, it uniquely faced a sudden decline from 50
percent
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per cent
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 to 30
percent
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. In
1990s
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, there were some sphere changes
due to
 climbing in
theater
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 activity from the low point,
in addition
 to a minimal fall in reading from 40
percent
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 to 20
percent
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. From
2000s
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 to
2010s
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the 2010s
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, the mentioned
activities
 could be divided into 2 groups, the first section
such
 as surfing the internet, hiking, theatre
as well as
 reading rocketed by nearly 30
percent
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 in mean. Parallelly, the least activity "watching TV" was no longer voluminous
to plunge
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 dramatically from 70
percent
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 to 65
percent
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words activities, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
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