The diagram illustrates how steel rods are manufactured in the furniture industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram provides information about the

process

of

steel

rods

in the furniture industry.

Overall

, there are 11 stages to produce

steel

rods

. The first stage is ironing and yellowing raw material and will end in the

inspections’

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process

before dispatching to the customer. The first

process

is execution on the raw material which manpower will iron and yellow ore with added carbon in it. After the raw material melted in the melting slit machine at

temperature

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a temperature

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around 1300-1500 degree

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.

Then

, it will be refined in the smelting cabin on the refinement

process

and continued in the pouring machine that candescent

mental

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metal

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is poured into ingots. The fifth

process

is strand casting where ingots are connected to a cooling reservoir at

temperature

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60

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of 60

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-100

degree

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celsius

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and the metal

went

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through nozzles. In

this

cooling stage, the strands will be rolled and after

that

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that,

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the

steel

will be put on the heating machine.

Subsequently

, before

inspection

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inspection,

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the

steel

rods

is

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are

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surface

check

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to measure the quality of

steel

rods

. Afterwards,

cutting

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the cutting

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process

to

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is to

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make sure the

size’s

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size is

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standard and

stamping

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stamp

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the ID on the

steel

roods

then

inspection to check the quality of the product.

Finally

, after the circumstances of

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the process

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process

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process,

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the

steel

rods

will

ready

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be ready

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to be distributed to the furniture company.