The diagrams below show the life cycle o f a species o f large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The diagram below illustrates the life span of
salmon
, a type of large fish found in the ocean. Looking from an overall
perspective, it is apparent that there are 4 stages in it
lifespan consisting Correct pronoun usage
its
eggs
, fry, smolt Change preposition
of eggs
anf
adult Correct your spelling
and
salmon
. Besides
, there are different environmental conditions involved for salmon
to grow optimally.
Initially
, the salmon
will migrate from seas
to Fix the agreement mistake
sea
river
and lay Add an article
the river
eggs
in upper
Add an article
the upper
an upper
river
where the water current is slow
moving, making Change the adjective
slowly
eggs
not to be disturbed by the moving waters. Eggs
were laid in the vicinity of stones and reeds and it takes 5-6 months to hatch.
Next,
the hatched baby fish called fry of about 3-8cm length
will swim to the lower Change preposition
in length
river
where the water is fast flowing and will grow bigger into smolt
of about 12-15cm long.
Correct article usage
a smolt
Subsequently
, after 4 years in thelower
Correct your spelling
the lower
river
, the smolts will swim into the open seas and take of
about 5 years to grow into Change preposition
apply
its
adult Correct pronoun usage
apply
salmon
of about 70-76cm long.Submitted by coke_sars on
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