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The table below gives infromation on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives infromation on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the expenditure
of
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on
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 three main materials
includingFood
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including Food
/ drink / Tobacco, Clothing / Footwear ,and leisure/
Education
 in five countries in the year 2002.
Overall
, it can be seen that all countries spend the highest
percentage
ih
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on
 Food/drinks /
Tobaco
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Tobacco
, followed by clothing/footwear,
while
 the lowest
percentage
observed
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in
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on
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 leisure or
education
 items. Turkey and Ireland had the largest consumption of Food /drinks / Tobacco
expecienced
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experienced
experience
 at 32.144. , and 28.9% respectively,
However
, the remaining countries used
about
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more than 10%
in
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 the same item.
Moreover
, Italy consumed about 9% of Clothing / Footwear which was the most
significat
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significant
percentage
. In the same category, Ireland , Spain,and Sweden bought the same amount of clothing between 5% and 6 %.
Whereas
, Sweden
was
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had
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 the lowest
percentage
 of consumption
on
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this
 item. It is noticeable that leisure or
education
 expenditure was the
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 item marked as 4.35%. in Turkey,
arround
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around
 3% in Italy and Sweden, and Just under 2% in Ireland, and Spain.
To sum up
 , the consumption of these items varies throughout all
contries
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countries
, but highly in
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the
an
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eating category , and low in
education
 and entertainment.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words education, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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