TASK1 : The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.

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The chart illustrates the average daily

hours

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spent on recreational activities by

tourists

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from China, America, Turkey and Brazil during their vacation in Greece in August 2019.

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, reading

books

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was the most popular leisure activity among all four nationalities,

while

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visiting places was the least popular. There were significant variations in the time spent on beach activities amongst

tourists

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from the four countries. Chinese

tourists

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choosing reading

books

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as their main leisure

activities

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activity

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with 8

hours

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per day was the opposite for visiting places only 1 hour per day.

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, the daily

hour

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hours

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reading

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of reading

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books

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tourists

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from Brazil stood at 4

hours

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, which was twice as much as visiting places for just 2

hours

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, Turkish and American

tourists

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demonstrated similar patterns,

while

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reading

books

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took 4

hours

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and 5

hours

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respectively, both groups

spending

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hours

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apply

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sightseeing. The amount of time that

tourists

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from distinct countries enjoy their holiday at the beach gradually rises in the sequence of Chinese (3

hours

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), American (4

hours

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), Turkish (5

hours

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), and Brazilian (6

hours

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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, tourists, books with synonyms.

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4
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

175 words

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nationalities
cultural trends
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TASK1 : The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.

Some people believe the professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family and friends. To that extent do you agree or disagree.

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?