TASK1 : The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.

TASK1 : The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
The chart illustrates the average daily
hours
spent on recreational activities by
tourists
from China, America, Turkey and Brazil during their vacation in Greece in August 2019.
Overall
, reading
books
was the most popular leisure activity among all four nationalities,
while
visiting places was the least popular. There were significant variations in the time spent on beach activities amongst
tourists
from the four countries. Chinese
tourists
choosing reading
books
as their main leisure
activities
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with 8
hours
per day was the opposite for visiting places only 1 hour per day.
Similarly
, the daily
hour
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hours
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reading
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books
of
tourists
from Brazil stood at 4
hours
, which was twice as much as visiting places for just 2
hours
.
Additionally
, Turkish and American
tourists
demonstrated similar patterns,
while
reading
books
took 4
hours
and 5
hours
respectively, both groups
spending
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3
hours
on
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sightseeing. The amount of time that
tourists
from distinct countries enjoy their holiday at the beach gradually rises in the sequence of Chinese (3
hours
), American (4
hours
), Turkish (5
hours
), and Brazilian (6
hours
).
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, tourists, books with synonyms.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average number
  • leisure activities
  • tourists
  • nationalities
  • cultural trends
  • interests
  • vacation
  • influence
  • participation
  • impact
  • weather
  • events
  • festivals
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