TASK1 : The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
The chart illustrates the average daily
hours
spent on recreational activities by tourists
from China, America, Turkey and Brazil during their vacation in Greece in August 2019.
Overall
, reading books
was the most popular leisure activity among all four nationalities, while
visiting places was the least popular. There were significant variations in the time spent on beach activities amongst tourists
from the four countries.
Chinese tourists
choosing reading books
as their main leisure activities
with 8 Fix the agreement mistake
activity
hours
per day was the opposite for visiting places only 1 hour per day. Similarly
, the daily hour
Fix the agreement mistake
hours
reading
Change preposition
of reading
books
of tourists
from Brazil stood at 4 hours
, which was twice as much as visiting places for just 2 hours
. Additionally
, Turkish and American tourists
demonstrated similar patterns, while
reading books
took 4 hours
and 5 hours
respectively, both groups spending
3 Wrong verb form
spent
hours
on
sightseeing.
The amount of time that Change preposition
apply
tourists
from distinct countries enjoy their holiday at the beach gradually rises in the sequence of Chinese (3 hours
), American (4 hours
), Turkish (5 hours
), and Brazilian (6 hours
).Submitted by ieltsamiedu on
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, tourists, books with synonyms.
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