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the chart below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

the chart below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
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The pie chart compares the eating habits of people including three types of goodness, which can be hurtful to organisms with a large amount of consumption
Overall
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while
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 added sugar products were used mostly in
snacks
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, sodium and saturated fat consumption was mainly eaten
in
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at
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dinner
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.
To begin
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 with sodium nutrients, the percentage of its application in
snacks
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 and in breakfast was completely similar, 14%.
however
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, at lunch, the percentage reached 29% and at
dinner
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, its usage constituted almost half of the diagram. Regarding saturation fat,
this
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 product was the least used in breakfast,only 16%,
while
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 in
snacks
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 and at lunch the rate was relatively similar, 21% and 26%. And the highest rate showed
dinner
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, where the percentage was more than a third. and
finally
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, added sugar
nutrient
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nutrients
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, which almost all contained in
snacks
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, exactly 42%,
although
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 in breakfast it was only 16%. at lunch meals,
this
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 product made 19%, which is a little bit lower than the proportion of
dinner
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, where it was almost a quarter.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words snacks, dinner with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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