The line graph shows the percentage of Australia export to four countries from 1992 to 2012.
The graph indicates the volume of
Australian
exports
in percentage by destination country to Japan
, the US, China
, and India between 1990 and 2012. Overall
, the shares of exports
to Japan
and the US declined, while
the shares of exports
to India and China
were on rising
trend.
In 1990, Add an article
a rising
the rising
Japan
and the US were the major Australian
export destinations, accounting for more than 25% and 10% of the Australian
total exports
, respectively. However
, exports
to Japan
sharply dropped to 20% in 1995, from which it continued to decline gradually. Between 1990 and 2012, Australian
exports
to the US fluctuated, and by 2012, the share of exports
to the US was less than 10%. In contrast
, exports
to China
drastically surged from less than 5% in 1990 to 30% by 2012. During the same period, exports
to India also
gradually rose, although
it is less drastic compared to China
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