The charts show participation in sporting activities at RT college over a 35-year period and the number of cyclists at this college in 1995
The line graph provides data on the proportion of undergraduates who took part in swimming, team sports and gym activities at RT college from 1960 to 1995.
It can be clearly seen that swimming counted up the largest part of the total in 1995 with a value of half of the total equally and
then
started softly decline to 2010 with a percentage of around 15 per cent
. While
swimming was descending, gym activities started rising smoothly from a mere 5 per cent
in 1995 and ended In 2010 with a value of approximately a quarter.
Furthermore
, team sports showed the most consistent results - they started from just above 30 per cent
at the start of a period and ended with the same result, displaying slight hesitation in the year 2010. Thereafter
, in the end, the proportion of these 3 participation results was equal - roughly 8 per cent
between them.
Overall
, while
gym activities showed a strong increase, swimming fell down. However
, team sports remained stable throughout the period.Submitted by eparfenenkov on
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