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The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished.The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit,during the samw two periods.

The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished.The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit,during the samw two periods.
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These two pie charts depict the results of the survey, conducted among
visitors
 of the Ashton
museum
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 one year before its' reconstruction, and one year after it. The research was divided into 5 categories: Very satisfied, Satisfied, Dissatisfied, Very dissatisfied,
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 response. At first sight, we can see that
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was
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 high level of
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response - 95%,
moreover
 - that the refurbishing of the museum improved the experience of people.
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 the beginning, before the changes only 15% of the
visitors
 were very satisfied, and
this
 number
rised
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rose
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 more than twice to 35% after the reconstruction. The number of
sutisfied
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satisfied
 people increased from 30% to 40%. The third category was "dissatisfied", and the percentage of
such
visitors
falled
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 rapidly
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 three hold from 40% to only 15%. And the
last
 part of the chart
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demonstrates
 that the amount of very dissatisfied people decreased from 10% before
defubishing
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refurbishing
refinishing
 to 5% after it. In conclusion - the reconstruction of the Ashdown Museum added
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positive fillings to the
visitors
.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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