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visitors
of the Ashton museum
one year before its' reconstruction, and one year after it. The research was divided into 5 categories: Very satisfied, Satisfied, Dissatisfied, Very dissatisfied, Capitalize word
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- that the refurbishing of the museum improved the experience of people.
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