You stayed at your friend’s house when you attended a conference in Australia. Unfortunately, you left a large envelope with some important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter: thank your friend for the stay describe where you left the envelope ask him/her to return it to you by post Begin your letter as follows: Dear ___ You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

dear Aman, I hope you are doing well.I am writing
this
letter to thank you for the warm welcome of me , and the hospitality provided to you . The food cooked by your mothers was delicious.
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really miss that taste.
However
, family bonding in-house taught
the
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value of relationships.
However
, I forget my documents file in my room
due to
rush.It is the
gray coloured
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file which
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left on the table in the room. There is the table in your guest room on the right side , usually put my all documents on it.I hope the file will be in the same place .
This
file not only has my all important documents but
also
some cash.Could you please locate
this
file and send it to me via post
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I will email you my new home address.
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am requesting you use
speed
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post service for mailing. I hope you will post
this
soon. Best regards, Parm
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coherence cohesion tips
Try to ensure your letter has a clear and logical structure. This will make it easier for your friend to understand the different parts of your message.
task achievement tips
Add more details or specific information to fully develop your response and meet all parts of the task adequately.
greeting closing highlight
The greeting and closing of your letter are appropriate, which sets a friendly tone.
politeness highlight
The request to send the documents by speed post is clear and polite.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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