The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purpose in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevant.
These six pie charts demonstrate using of
water
in six different part
of the world (North Fix the agreement mistake
parts
America
, South America
, Europe, Africa, Central Asia
, and South East Asia
) for the variety of the aims in percents. At first sight, we can see that there are two main purpose
of Change to a plural noun
purposes
water
using
- Agricultural and Industrial. These 6 areas can be divided into two main groups - one of them with significant Wrong verb form
use
Agriculture
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agricultural use
Use
(Africa, Central Asia
, South East Asia
, and South America
), and the second one (North America
and Europe) with the
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apply
essencial
Industrial Correct your spelling
essential
Use
.
Firstly
, the group with prevailing Agricultural Use
. In the first place
there is Central Add a comma
place,
Asia
with the larges
amount of Correct your spelling
largest
water
(88%) for farming and the smallest quantity (only 5%) for manufacture
. Wrong verb form
manufacturing
Then
we have an
Africa and South East Correct article usage
apply
Asia
with 84% and 81% of agricultural aims, and 7% and 12% of Industrial use
respectively. On the last
place in this
group is the
South Correct article usage
apply
America
with 71% and 10% accordingly
. Rephrase
respectively
Moreover
, this
continent is in the first place (with 19%) between all 6 areas in the Domestic Use
.
Further
, the second group is characterise
by Change the verb form
is characterised
highly
Industrial Change the word
high
Use
- 48% in the
North Correct article usage
apply
America
and 53% in Europe, and the rapid fall of
the Change preposition
in
using
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use of
water
for farming - 39% and 32% respectively.
In conclusion, it looks very clearly in
which part of the world there are mostly industrial or mostly agricultural countriesChange preposition
at
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, america, asia, use with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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