The line graph illustrates the number of magazine sales by a publisher in 4 European countries between 1999 and 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

The line graph illustrates the number of magazine sales by a publisher in 4 European countries between 1999 and 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph gives information about the proportion of How many magazines sold by publishers in four different nations over a
period
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of four years from 1999 to 2002.
Overall
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it can be seen that there was an upward trend in magazine sales in France and Belgium.
However
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, the figure for selling magazines in Germany
was
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the
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only fell,
while
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the magazine trade in Holland remained stable. In 1999 France contributed to the magazines market by around 4
million
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Euro
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. From
this
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point onwards there was a considerable increase to exactly 5
million
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Euro
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in 2002.
In addition
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, the contribution of Belgium was made up by roughly 2
million
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Euro
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at the end
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of the
period
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and it had a dramatic growth to the peak at 5
million
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Euro
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at the end
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of the
period
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.
On the other hand
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, 4.5
million
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in revenue was received in Germany, so it was clear the highest percentage of income. Unfortunately, it experienced a moderate decrease
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1
million
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Euro
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in 2001, before hitting the base at 2.5
million
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Euros in 2002.
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, the magazine trade in Holland stood at 3
million
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Euroro at the beginning of the
period
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and it had an equal portion in 2002.
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