The line graph illustrates the number of magazine sales by a publisher in 4 European countries between 1999 and 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

The line graph illustrates the number of magazine sales by a publisher in 4 European countries between 1999 and 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
The line graph gives information about the proportion of How many magazines sold by publishers in four different nations over a
period
of four years from 1999 to 2002.
Overall
it can be seen that there was an upward trend in magazine sales in France and Belgium.
However
, the figure for selling magazines in Germany
was
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only fell,
while
the magazine trade in Holland remained stable. In 1999 France contributed to the magazines market by around 4
million
Euro
. From
this
point onwards there was a considerable increase to exactly 5
million
Euro
in 2002.
In addition
, the contribution of Belgium was made up by roughly 2
million
Euro
at the end
of the
period
and it had a dramatic growth to the peak at 5
million
Euro
at the end
of the
period
.
On the other hand
, 4.5
million
in revenue was received in Germany, so it was clear the highest percentage of income. Unfortunately, it experienced a moderate decrease
by
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1
million
Euro
in 2001, before hitting the base at 2.5
million
Euros in 2002.
Moreover
, the magazine trade in Holland stood at 3
million
Euroro at the beginning of the
period
and it had an equal portion in 2002.
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