The line graph illustrates the number of magazine sales by a publisher in 4 European countries between 1999 and 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
The line graph gives information about the proportion of How many magazines sold by publishers in four different nations over a
period
of four years from 1999 to 2002.
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Overall
it can be seen that there was an upward trend in magazine sales in France and Belgium. Linking Words
However
, the figure for selling magazines in Germany Linking Words
was
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the
only fell, Correct article usage
apply
while
the magazine trade in Holland remained stable.
In 1999 France contributed to the magazines market by around 4 Linking Words
million
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Euro
. From Use synonyms
this
point onwards there was a considerable increase to exactly 5 Linking Words
million
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Euro
in 2002. Use synonyms
In addition
, the contribution of Belgium was made up by roughly 2 Linking Words
million
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Euro
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at the end
of the Linking Words
period
and it had a dramatic growth to the peak at 5 Use synonyms
million
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Euro
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at the end
of the Linking Words
period
.
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On the other hand
, 4.5 Linking Words
million
in revenue was received in Germany, so it was clear the highest percentage of income. Unfortunately, it experienced a moderate decrease Use synonyms
by
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of
million
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Euro
in 2001, before hitting the base at 2.5 Use synonyms
million
Euros in 2002. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the magazine trade in Holland stood at 3 Linking Words
million
Euroro at the beginning of the Use synonyms
period
and it had an equal portion in 2002.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words period, million, euro with synonyms.
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